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2005-03-02, 20:27
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Lo, they do call to me...
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Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: virginia beach, VA
Posts: 2,209
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acid bath burial
Bloody dying victim
hung and bled
from chains above
oevr a covered tank
decension
lowered into the vat
screaming for mercy
his cries lost in
insanity
Acid
Bath
Burial
skin melts from his face
agonizing shrieks
as his muscle melts away
drowning, he is eaten
from inside
reduced to nothing
Acid
Bath
Burial
Entombed in acidic decay
Acid
Bath
Burial
his entity melting away
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Too grim to function
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2005-03-03, 00:13
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dsnt trust ne1 < 30
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Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Home is where the <3 is
Posts: 8,881
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gnarly!!!! Something about tank and vat just didn't flow right, but I think that's just me. That was gruesome though. I thought it was good.
For some reason it rings a bell of an old b/w movie. I'm wondering if Uncle Vinnie Price met his demise in House of Wax falling into a vat and that's what I'm thinking of. I can't even remember for sure if it was that movie or not though.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2005-03-03, 00:20
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Senior Metalhead
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Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: Braidwood, IL in the U.S.A.
Posts: 200
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Sweet shit, dude.  |
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